Wednesday, January 11, 2012

here you meCan you help me with english lyrics?

Hi guys,sorry for my english. I'm Italian so i can't speak english very well.
I wrote a song and lyrics and the lyrics are in English. I wanna now if the lyrics are right.
Here you are!


Love is something that i can not explain,
I don't understand why it hurts everyday,
And I feel like my heart is gone

She said that i was her life,
So tell me now,how you can always lie,
And now i know for real that my heart is gone

So I said " Go Away "
Hope,I will never feel the same
Love is something that I can not explain
And I said

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My heart is gone and I feel in a trap,
You take my heart from me and I wanna cry,
So tell me why and tell me how,
You can always lie,you can always lie,

My heart is gone and I feel in a trap,
You know I care about you and now I wanna try
To forget the past,you will not be the last
So tell me how you cahere you men always lie,

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Every thing that I remember of you,
It makes me feel bad and my heart is sad
And I can't forget all that memories
That hurts me...

So I said " Go Away "
Hope,I will never feel the same
Love is something that I can not explain
And I said

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My heart is gone and I feel in a trap,
You take my heart from me and I wanna cry,
So tell me why and tell me how,
You can always lie,you can always lie,

My heart is gone and I feel in a trap,
You know I care about you and now I wanna try
To forget the past,you will not be the last
So tell me how you can always lie.

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Did you forget all that memories? Yes you did
Did you forget our first meeting? Yes you did
Did you forget our first kiss? Yes you did
Did you forget me? Oh Yes you did

Phere you meLease help me and tell me if this lyrics is correct and fine,becouse today i must sing!
Thank you!
yes it is right good luck when your singing :)
PS: TI SUGGERISCO QUESTO:
1- al posto di'' you take my heart from me and i wanna cry'' puoi dire '' you took it away and i feel so bad'' .... ''It'' perche' hai gia' detto ''heart'' nella frase prima

2-our first '' date'' ..al posto di ''meeting''

3-you are not ''the last'' , io preferirei '' you are not the end'' .....oppure '' the last one''

pero' bel testo!
I think your english is pretty good :)
The lyrics is fine. By the way, good song.
ya sounds like ok grammar. no ones gonna realize if you're singing anyway. nice song :)

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